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Camp Bentzon

Camp Bentzon 2011
1.)Swimming
2.)sailing
3.)Abbsailing

Plan
1.)About Swimming
2.)when i was sailing


1st Paragraph
As it was free time we zoomed off onto the the beach and swam to the wharf. When we got there we went on it and dived off, we tried to see who could do the biggest bomb, well as usual it is always Richard but in a fun way. He was helping me get on the wharf because I was struggling to get up because I didn't want to go all the way around to the other side to get back up.

2nd Paragraph
Well we were waiting and waiting and then out came Peter he gave us instructions. Then of we went to sail it was so fun but scary. And I really thought we were going to drown because we were out deep and tide was in well at lest I had a turn and took one of my fears away.

My Writing About Mars

1.)It is so impossible to live on Mars because there is know gravity and there is so much more things why you cant live in Mars. But the main thing is that it is much to hot if you went there with know shoes you would die. But know one is that stupid to go to mars and wast there time led a lone go there in no shoes any on would think your poor any way who is dumb anoth to go there. Now lets hit to the point.

Mars has two moons and none rings. And Mars is the forth planet from the Sun and is much smaller then the earth. The Color of Mars is sort of rookie sandy and dry and hot it has ice caps like earth. And is 687 days to get there it would take 24 hours and 27 minutes to get from Mars back to Earth That is just like a night and a half a hour and 7 minutes. The two moons a called Phobos and Deimos.

My Planets In Order

My - Mercury
Very - Venus
Excellent - Earth
Mum - Mars
Just - Jupiter
Sent - Saturn
Us - Uranus
Noodles - Neptune

School Holidays

School Holidays.
Plans.
Intro
P.1 what I did in the holidays
P.2 going to YMCA pools
P.3 swimming,bombing,racing
P.4 eating
P.5 going

In the holidays I went to the YMCA pools we were so exsited we got dressed be for we went there so all we had to do was go and pay and as soon as we were in the door take a hell of a jump and run and jump in the pool .

As we were just getting ready to have race we had a practice on our way back we went again and that was our final one back my auntie Sam was cheering and she was wining until I got mad because she always wins and i wasn't gonna let that happen again so of I went and nearly to the try line who ho and there i was the winner.

So my Auntie Sam's boy friend went to get us some fishing chips and when he walked in the door we ran out fast because we were hungry so we each got a hot dog and some chips each when we finished we rest our stomach for about twenty minutes then of we go back in to the pool.

Then we got told that were going to go I tried to hied so I didn't have to go but my auntie came to look for me and she told me to get dressed so I had a shower in the girls changing room and got change after my shower and as we were walking out I said thanks and good bye.

Big Exzorsting Day.

In the weekend my friends And I went to the mall called Silvia Park what we did there was rated the shop for shoes we searched and searched and then whoop Dee do we found the white ones we had been searching for long as we were so happy. then we kept putting on shoes until we found the ones we could fit they were on special they only cost 25$ really cheap they a usually 40$ then we walked to the train and caught one of the trains to GI we went to the cafe to see who was in it we only saw my sister vaine then we told her to come with us to Mac Donald's we ate until we could eat no more then walking home really full like you cant eat in a hole week half a sleep as our friends say good by it fells like you cant even yell to them and there only across the road we see one of our other friends and that woke us right up we went and played kicks then we had a challenge who can kick it over the pole or higher but my sister one that competition wow she said with excitement then we fout little drops on our head then my sister Teari and I went in side and had some more competitions with each other I won then my friend went home we watched T V and we were so exzorsted we fell A sleep after five minitues then when we woke up we had our yum dinner we had laznia and went to sleep for our big day at school tomorry and that was what we did on our bog day at school...

Why should you go to Samoa

Samoa’s location in the heart of the Pacific has protected there culture and surrounded by such beauty, Samoans have perfected the art of being. Our country may be lower than many countries but we score highly on any happiness index. Robert Louis Stevenson, the great story teller,called his fellow Samoans “the happy people.” ...discover why well do you get it there is a lot of why you should go.

New Zealand vs France.

“Yum” I said as I was eating my food, and once I finished my food my brother's, sister's and I helped my mom clean.I had a lot of fun making our beds down stairs so we can all watch our TV together and as me and my brothers her was bringing the matres down stairs having a bit of fun bolling each other over then we finished. And what we done was parked up and watched the game as it started when the As it started we stood up and sang the nationally Anthem and my brothers done the haka with the All Blacks. As Ma’a Nonu was going to get a try we were cheering and then my sister came and ruined it out of the blues in front of the TV she just did some hip hop moves she learnt at her dance practice but lucky there was a replay of the try because we weren't able to see the first try, we were so loud one of our neighbours came to our house because they didn't have sky, but that's all right but my mom wasn't happy because they thought they could help thought the could help there self to our food but my mum thought they were only coming over to watch the RWC game because that’s what they said, could not hear them making something to eat because we were cheering to loud (wow) goes my mom and I and that is the end.

Facts About USA

This is the story of USA the capital city is Washington there is a big slide there that is the size of a town thats big it can fit more then 4000 people in it I think it i s the biggest water slide i know of it is probably the best the best water slide iv,e ever heard of and I haven't Evan been there. other countries probably have a lot of things to do in there country and we think theres is so cool and they think our country is thats only because they haven't been here before well they probably have but not in a while.THE END.

Cool Places To Go

THE MOUTON HARBOR

There are some beautiful natural wonders here in America, we have the grand canyon Niagara falls and in Oregon we have Crater lake. Scientist say thousands of years ago Mount Mazama exploded, sending rivers of lave gushing from the top. After being quiet for years the mountain finally trembled, cracked, and the edges of the crater fell into a big hole at the top. That is why some people say Mount Mazama swallowed its self. Now the crates is filled with clear blue water…it’s like looking into gods bowl….There is a small village where your can find quaint places to stay and visit. There is a highway that runs around the lake, it’s a beautiful sight.

THE GLASS WALK

The final place I think everyone should visit is the Grand Canyon. I figured I should mention this one because it truly is a natural wonder of the world. Its depth and vast size are breath taking and makes you feel connected to the world like no other place. The Grand Canyon speaks history and engulfs your soul, it’s so beautiful and worth any effort it may take to see it. I also recommend if you are in a healthy state of life that you and your family should take some of the many tours both hiking rafting the river are fun and exhilarating. See one of the wonders of the natural world right here in the USA take you family and have some fun.

The brown cupcake

In Oklahoma you can find an authentic Indian-village. Indian-city is in the Tokugawa Hills near Anadarko Oklahoma. The Indians have built everything here from the grass houses to the fine art. Tours are held teaching about the customs of different tribes, Indian dances and feasts are held. Learn about their clothing, tools, musical instruments and more. Meet the ancestors of those who where here first see what life was like before big cities and stone houses. This is a very interesting place to visit, defiantly for the kids.
Grass hut Indian City Oklahoma.

Movie dictation

This is the introduction to a movie. I will be trying to edit it for punctuation. Do you know what movie this script is from?

this is the story of how i died don,t worry this is achcallya very fun story and the truth is it isn,t mine. this is a story of a girl name Rapunzel and it starts with the sun now once upon a time a singel drop of sun light fell from the hevens and from that small drop of sun grew a magic golden flower it had the ability to hell the sick and ingerd oh you see that old woman over there you might want to remeber her shes kind of inportant well setrees pastand and a hop skip and a boate ride away there grew a kingdom the kingdom was ruelled by a beloved king and queen well the queen she was about to have a baby but she got sick really sick she was running out of time and thats when people usally start to look for a miracal or in this case a magic golden fower
nah i told you shell be inportant you see instead of shareing the sons gift this woman mother gufful horted heaing power and use it for hundres of yers and all shehad to do was sing a special song flower gleam and glue let your power shine make the clock reverse bring back what once was mine what once was mine. alright you get the jist she sings to it she turns younge creeppy right?’the magic flower heald the Queen .a healthey baby girl,a princess was born with
We found it the magic of the golden flower heald the Queen beautiful golden hair(baby sqeking)
ill give you a hint thats Rupunzel to sellabrte her birth the the queen lanced a fluing lanton in to the sky and for that one moment every thing was perfect and then that moment ended...
fllower gleam and blue let your power shine make the clock re hoogather broke in to the casell (baby crying)and stole the chiled and just like that gone the kindom search and search and could not find the princess but deep with in the forest in a hidden tower goffen rased the childas her own goffel had tak wat once was lost bring back what once was mine gofel had found her new magic flower but this time she was deturment to keep it in why cant i go out side the out side world is a dangerous place filled with horibel sefish people you must stay here were you safe do you under stand flower yes mommy but the walls of that tower could not hide evertihng each year of her birthd Queen and King relesed thousens of lantons in to the sky and hopes that some day the lost princess will return

What I Like About My Work

What I like about my work is that I caught up on my work and i,m going to try do that with all my work. My favourite peace of work is my Beautiful places to go because its cool and I put allot of effort in to in so that's really cool. I use to see to have to stay in at class but now I can go out side I use to stay in class because I was not concentrating on my work in stead i was talking to my friends and that's not good.

Badmonton

On the best sport day room18 and I had a game called Badminton. We did a lot of styled things like when you hit the shuttle up from behind your back and when you go down to keep the shuttle in the air. The main idea of the game is to have fun and keep the ball in the air. I’m just a beginner that is why the lady called Donna is the best in the whole school which is because she has trained for years.
When we got there we sat and listened to Donna to see what we were going to be doing. The girls got their rackets first because it should always be ladies first and then the boys got their rackets. We had to buddy up and do under arm throw the shuttle because that is how you keep the ball up. Some times we throw the shuttle up on our own just to have fun.
When I grow up I want to be a professional Badminton player. When I first saw it I thought it was boring, but when I tried it, it was amazing. Badminton is the best sport ever so if you think sports are boring always try to play it first.Then we went back to class thinking of our amazing sports called Badmonton.THE END.

2011

I am in Room 18